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Because , .
If you are just starting out, and you are still developing an original, evidence-based claim to defend, a simpler formula is probably best. Once you have done the research, and you understand the subject, then a formula like the following won’t look like random words; it will suggest a way to frame a nuanced, complex argument that goes beyond making non-controversial factual statements.
While says , says . While the two authors disagree over , they both share a deep concern over . refusal to accept suggests that is . | |
What really matters is not guessing the magically correct words to fit some secret formula that your mean instructor is refusing to tell you. What matters is that you have researched your subject, that you have found and engaged meaningfully with peer-reviewed academic sources, and that you are developing an evidence-based claim, rather than summarizing or giving unsupported opinion. |
Academic Argument: Evidence-based Defense of a Non-obvious Position
Parts of a Thesis Statement
The thesis statement has 3 main parts : the limited subject , the precise opinion , and the blueprint of reasons .
Make sure you’ve chosen a subject that meets your instructor’s requirements for the assignment. (It never hurts to ask.)
The precise opinion gives your answer to a question about the subject. A good precise opinion is vital to the reader’s comprehension of the goal of the essay .
A blueprint is a plan. It lets the builder know that the foyer will be here, the living room will be to the east, the dining room to the west, and the family room will be north.The blueprint of an essay permits you to see the whole shape of your ideas before you start churning out whole paragraphs.While it’s okay for you to start writing down your ideas before you have a clear sense of your blueprint, your reader should never encounter a list of details without being told exactly what point these details are supposed to support. (For more details on the reasoning blueprint, see Blueprinting .)
The biography challenges the Western genre’s stereotype of the “savage Indian” through . | |
In the blueprint, the author . The author of the example above introduces three different kinds of evidence: Informed by this blueprint, the reader expects to encounter one section (a paragraph or more) devoted to each subtopic.The . |
If your thesis statement introduces three reasons A, B and C, the reader will expect a section on reason A, a section on reason B, and a section on reason C.
For a single paragraph, you might only spend one sentence on each reason. For a 2-3 page paper, each reason might get its own paragraph. For a 10-page paper, each reason might contain its own local thesis statement, with its own list of reasons, so that each section involves several paragraphs.To emphasize the structure of your essay, repeat keywords or paraphrased ideas from the blueprint as you introduce the sections in which you expand on each point. Crafting good transitions is a skill that takes time and practice. ( See Transitions and Reminders of Thesis ).
Note : If you repeat your blueprint phrases and your thesis statement robotically (“The third point I want to talk about is how Black Elk Speaks accurately represents the Indian lifestyle through its direct quotes from Black Elk.”), your writing will be rather dry and lifeless. Dull writing is probably better than aimless rambling, although neither is terribly effective. |
Note : A thesis statement amounts to nothing if the paper is not completely focused on that main point . Blueprinting helps create the coherency of the thesis throughout the entire essay, which makes it a necessary part of the thesis statement.
accurately represents Indian lifestyle through its attention to cultural detail, its use of Indian words, and its direct quotes from Black Elk. | |
: The representation of Indian lifestyle in the book Black Elk Speaks : the book is accurate : the book pays attention to it uses , and it uses . (The rest of the paper will establish the truth of teach of these supporting points, and then explain why they add up to support the truth of the thesis statement.) |
Is a tragedy? | |
This is a question, not a statement. It’s fine to sit down at the keyboard with the intention of writing a paper to answer this question, but before you start churning out the sentences, you should have a clear idea of what answer you’re trying to support. |
This paper will look at the book’s attention to cultural detail, its use of Indian words, and its direct quotations from Black Elk, in order to determine whether accurately represents Indian lifestyle. | |
The above sample is slightly better because it offers more detail, but it still doesn’t say what position the author is taking on the topic of whether the book is accurate. |
Because the events in the story emphasize Black Elk’s role as a Sioux Warrior, and do not describe his eventual conversion to Catholicism and membership in the Society of St. Joseph, presents a skewed and simplified view of the complex history of Native Americans. | |
Note that the above sample contains a (the accuracy of Black Elk Speaks), (it is skewed and simplified), and (because the book only tells part of the story). You don’t need to present those three parts in that exact order every time; furthermore, your instructor may have a good reason to ask you for a different organization. But most of the time, including these three parts will help your reader to follow your ideas much more closely. |
Biographies of all types can teach us many things about the past. What was the culture like? What was the language like? And what did the people say? One such book is Black Elk Speaks, which tells the story of a Sioux warrior in the late 1800s. How accurate is this book? This paper will investigate the cultural details, the language, and what Black Elk actually said, in order to determine the answer. | |
The above sample starts off with a wordy, general statement about biographies. But the main topic isn’t about biographies of all types, it’s specifically about one book, Black Elk Speaks. |
17 Oct 2000 — originally posted by Nicci Jordan, UWEC Junior 08 Dec 2000 — first posted here. Maintained by Prof. Jerz. 13 Dec 2003 — links updated 22 Sep 2006 — moderate revisions by Jerz 29 Oct 2011 — updated by Jerz 14 June 2015 — minor adjustments
Blueprinting: Planning Your Essay A blueprint is a rough but specific plan , or outline, which defines the structure of your whole essay. The blueprint, usually located within the thesis statement, is a brief list of the points you plan to make, compressed into just a few words each, in the same order in which they appear in the body of your paper.
Hochstein, Jordan, and Jerz Thesis Reminders A thesis reminder is a direct echo of the thesis statement . In a short paper, the topic sentence of each paragraph should repeat words or phrases from the thesis statement.
Dennis G. Jerz Timed Essays: Planning and Organizing in a Crunch
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Gibberish person may be skimming too fast. This always helps. I’m in the middle of replying to a student email on how to rework her thesis statement and I use your explanation as a clear explanation.
This has helped a lot, thank you.
I find this page helpful. Thank you!
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please I want some more examples of how to construct a very good acedamic essays
From this class,I kind of know what is thesis statement.It is a strong support of a whole passage,it can inform people of what the passage is telling,only by using a few words .It should have the keywords and a good organization to make itself brief but rich.After learning this class,I think I will be better at writing the thesis statement.Thanks
I am doing a project for my MST…but iam finding it difficult in putting up my paragraphs which needs to include my subject and limited subject…..pliz advice me on how to put up my paragraph
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I am doing preparation of ielts exam . but I faface difficulty in grammar and especially in thesis line which I confuse that what should i write in thesis line among all kinds of essay …plz tell me but should I do to improve it.
I think you should read more and write more.After writing,you can ask someone that is good at English learning to help you know what your mistakes are.
Vehicles has become a essential part of human being life. People used to bicycle but by the time mode of commute has been replaced by car .however, still in some cities people prefer to ride bicycle for travelling.
Plz tell me how can I impressive to my intro and how can I improve my writing skill
Jonu, I’d say the most important helpful thing you can do is expose yourself to English as spoken by native English speakers, talking with people who know the language well enough that they can correct you immediately, in casual conversation, when you make one of the word-level errors that only an expert user of the language would spot. There is no shortcut — exposing yourself to a language is the only way to learn it.
I happened to come across this video, which is geared towards a young audience, but is written for English language learners. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IqxuNrhKhMc
Hi i am doing the preparation of competitive exam , i have to write an Essay of 2500-2800 words, data should be critical and researched base, for example there is Essay on Climate change , then please tell me how i develop a thesis statement, and how we write thesis statement, is it is written in the start of Essay or in the end of introduction, some people said that thesis satement should be written in start other say that this written in end of introductory paragraph. please help me with example thanks
Rab, if you are looking for my advice on thesis statements, you have found the right page. If you have any specific questions or comments about the content of this page, I’d be happy to address them. I’ve already put lots of time into this page, and at the moment I can’t think of a way to present my advice any more clearly.
Although you did say “please,” even so, “tell me how I develop a thesis statement” is asking for quite a lot.
What is your college major or your area of professonal expertise? If I asked you to tell me, right here on my blog, what I need to know in order to succeed in a competitive exam in your field, what would you say?
If I went to a doctor and said “Tell me how to diagnose a patient,” or I went to a judge and said “Tell me how to interpret the law,” or I went to an artist and said “Tell me how to be creative,” do you think they would be able give me a few sentences that completely answer my question and prepare me for professional work as a doctor, judge, or artist? If they had spent years as students learning their subject matter, and additional years teaching or writing a textbook on their specialty, they might be very good in their professions but I’d bet they’d all find it tough to answer such a question in any meaningful way.
I won’t be evaluating your submission, so my opinion on debatable topics such as where the thesis should go won’t be of any specific use to you.
thesis statement should be the last statement in your introductory paragraph, it will consist of a short explanation as to why you are writing the essay and what is involved.
That’s certainly a valid place to put a thesis statement, jentar. If your instructor tells you to put a thesis statement in a certain place, then putting it anywhere else is risky. But it’s also possible to start with a paragraph that grabs the reader’s attention with a gripping example that illustrates what’s at stake, and then give the thesis statement in the second paragraph.
This is great stuff. I wonder if you didn’t mean expansive rather than expensive in the following sentence. “Instead of claiming that a book “challenges a genre’s stereotypes,” you might instead argue that some text “provides a more expensive but more ethical solution than X” or “challenges Jim Smith’s observation that ‘[some quote from Smith here]’” instead.
Thanks for your feedback. I’m glad you found the page useful. I really did mean “expensive” in that example, though I am simply suggesting that considering cost is worth exploring in an argument, depending on the kind of argument you are making.
I found the information to be very informative and easy to understand. Thank you
Hi. I began an essay on the topic ; reasons why pursuing college education is important. I had it started off this way… Aristotle said it best when he stated, “Education is the best provision for life’s journey.” Pursuing a college education provides individuals with career pportunities, higher income and experiences necessary in the journey of life. Please do you think I started off good or too weak? I need your help as this is a great assignment for me to make up for my mid semester examination which I was unable to attend!
Your instructor is the one who will grade the assignment, so he or she is the best source of feedback. Without knowing what grade/level you are, or what kind of class you are taking, I can’t really advise you. However, unless you have read Aristotle’s works yourself and can place that quote in its context, I would not recommend pulling a random quote from a website and using it to start a paper. The complete quote is “Education is the best provision for the journey to old age,” but what does that mean?
The word “best” means there is at least a “good” and a “better,” and that by some measurement or judgement, a third thing is “best.” What are the two other sayings (at least) that you have compared to Aristotle, and what are the two other things (at least) that Aristotle thinks are not as good provision for life’s journey to old age? Why does your opinion (on at least three different sayings, of which the best is Aristotle’s), and at least three different provisions for old age (of which the best is education) help you to answer your instructor’s prompt about the reasons for pursing a college education?
What we think of as “college” is very different from the education that Aristotle would have received (or provided). I suggest you look into ways that a college education encourages critical thinking, which is a different way of thinking than “Did I get the right answer? Will my teacher approve? What’s the secret ‘correct’ answer in the back of my instructor’s book that I should memorize and spit back?” Maybe your instructor wants you to determine for yourself whether you feel gaining a college education is worth the intellectual effort.
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If you’ve ever summed up your feelings about your favorite croissant or reflected on the moral of a story about your grandfather, you’re already familiar with the basics of a thesis! There are some nuances, but you already have the foundations of thesis statements in mind. With a little refining, you’ll have no problems coming up with a thesis for your next essay.
A thesis statement is a single sentence that identifies the main idea or argument of the paper, including an overview of what you’ll specifically talk about in your essay.
Every essay has a thesis of some sort that usually appears as the last sentence of the intro paragraph . The thesis is really about the main idea of the essay.
Some essays, like argumentative essays and critical analysis essays , do present a thesis that is an opinion or argument because the main idea of the essay is an argument or opinion. For example:
Although peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are one of the most commonly eaten sandwiches, they are inferior to tuna sandwiches in flavor, nutrition, and general satisfaction.
Other thesis statements are just that: statements. They make a claim, but they aren’t truly arguments. For example:
Tuna sandwiches present a long history within the American working class that has affected the broader regional cultures of the United States.
You know what goes into a good thesis statement, but it can take a little time and practice to really figure out a good thesis. Often, the best way to get better at theses is to write more essays and maybe look at some examples of thesis statements , but looking at a few tips doesn’t hurt.
You’ll have two scenarios with your thesis: You’ll either be given a broad topic to focus on, or you’ll be allowed to choose your own topic. In both cases, you’ll have to narrow down your topic.
Don’t try to come up with some all-encompassing thesis statement that covers every single facet of the topic. That would be quite literally impossible, and frankly, trying to cover too much at once in your thesis can be boring. The more specific and direct your thesis statement, the more interesting it’ll be.
As mentioned, most students are taught that thesis statements are meant to act as arguments. The main reason for that is the aspect of discussion. An argument naturally builds discussion. (You’re stating an opinion, making points to support that opinion, and possibly considering other points of view.)
But an argument isn’t the only way to create a thesis statement that builds discussion. That can come from a wide range of different things, like:
Related to the above, one of the tricks of the trade for a good thesis that builds discussion is to work with the word although . An although statement naturally creates a point of comparison. It considers an opposing view before you get into your own claim. For example:
Although the pizza is a humble and everyday treat for many today, its history and evolution parallels many of the modern economic issues affecting Europe.
Although is by no means the only way to build this sort of thesis. Other starting words that can help you engage with the topic include:
This might seem counterintuitive, especially if you’re having trouble writing just one thesis, but in the early stages of an essay, it’s okay to have a few messy theses to choose from.
As you settle into your research, you can eventually narrow it down to one, but having some options can free you up. You can play around with wording, refine your ideas, or even create completely opposite thesis statements.
Related to the above, even as you get into the writing process, don’t be afraid to change your thesis. It’s not really meant to be some rigid object. Your thesis can grow and change and evolve with your writing.
Maybe in the middle of your body paragraphs you decide to change the main argument in your thesis. Maybe you forgot to mention an important point. Maybe your conclusion brings in a whole new point of insight. Allowing for a mutable thesis gives you room to make these adjustments.
Now that you’ve mastered the art of writing an effective thesis statement, you’re perfectly prepared to write some great essays from now on. Knowing how to write a thesis can help you in all your writing endeavors, even creative writing , but don’t worry if you’re having some trouble. Thesis statements are meant to take thought and time, so give your thesis the time it needs.
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Whether you’re writing a short essay or a doctoral dissertation, your thesis statement can be one of the trickiest sentences to formulate. Fortunately, there are some basic rules you can follow to ensure your thesis statement is effective and interesting, including that it must be a debatable analytical point, not a general truism.
To write an effective thesis statement, choose a statement that answers a general question about your topic. Check that your thesis is arguable, not factual, and make sure you can back it up your with evidence. For example, your thesis statement could be something like "Computers allow fourth graders an early advantage in technological and scientific education." To learn about writing thesis statements for different types of essays or how to incorporate them into your essay, keep reading! Did this summary help you? Yes No
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First, you need to determine what kind of argument you are writing. Are you writing a position paper? Sample topics would include illegal immigration, wolf protection programs, paying college athletes. Or, are you writing a solution paper, solving a problem? Sample topics include bullying, homelessness, pollution. Next, identify what you already know about this topic. Write a brief outline establishing what you want to argue on this topic. Establish the purpose of your argument. Establishing this before you start researching the topic will make it easier for you to determine what you need to cite in your paper. Next choose an appropriate format.
The two most common organization methods for the argument essay are as follows:
The argument is often the most difficult of essays for students to begin. We are many times as unsure of our positions as we are of our reasons for our positions on controversial topics. “Because that’s what I believe” is only the starting point. Explaining why you believe in your position is the task of the argument. In exploring a topic for a strong argument, solid reasons and sound evidence are keys to convincing your audience of your position. The following steps should help you work through the process of moving from belief to argument.
Choose a topic that you can argue either a position or a solution. For example, to argue a position would be to argue for or against something, like the death penalty. To argue a solution is to argue how to solve something, like how to solve the air pollution problem in Phoenix.
Example: The Effects of Political Correctness on Higher Education
On a blank sheet of paper, write your topic down and at least five reasons in support of and five reasons against your topic. Or, if you are writing a solution paper, look at least five different solutions for the problem.
See how the pros and cons relate. Decide which you want to write about. Do you want to focus on the pros or the cons? Pick the one you feel offers the most possibilities for exploration. Or, choose the solution that seems the most logical, the most doable.
Freewrite. Look at Chapter 1 and follow the prewriting process.
Transform your chosen topic into a “Guiding Question” and write it down. What is the main question that your essay will answer?
Example: What are three main effects of Political Correctness on Higher Education.
Find a variety of initial sources to help you answer your guiding question. You must use these sources in your work either in a quote, paraphrase and/or summary.
Now that you have gathered your information and collected new information, create an outline of your paper.
Answer your “Guiding Question” directly with your thesis statement.
Example: Why are literary works being banned when their overall theme is positive? Because of over-zealous proponents of Political Correctness, once celebrated literary works like Mark Twain’s Huckleberry Finn , William Shakespeare’s Hamlet , and Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird are being banned despite their important universal themes.
Check your outline. Place your thesis at the top of the outline followed by the causes and/or effects: I. II. III. Under each main point, place two main specific points that will support the general topic sentence and the thesis. Use capital letters for the specific points.
Write the rough draft.
Revise the rough draft using the tips in Chapter 4. If your instructor schedules a peer review, be present. You may also visit your college’s writing center and work with a tutor. Revise again and edit your draft until you have a solid, well developed and unique argument.
In any study of a subject, people engage in a “conversation” of sorts, where they read or listen to others’ ideas, consider them with their own viewpoints, and then develop their own stance. It is important in this “conversation” to acknowledge when we use someone else’s words or ideas. If we didn’t come up with it ourselves, we need to tell our readers who did come up with it.
It is important to draw on the work of experts to formulate your own ideas. Quoting and paraphrasing the work of authors engaged in writing about your topic adds expert support to your argument and thesis statement. You are contributing to a scholarly conversation with scholars who are experts on your topic with your writing. This is the difference between a scholarly research paper and any other paper: you must include your own voice in your analysis and ideas alongside scholars or experts.
All your sources must relate to your thesis, or central argument, whether they are in agreement or not. It is a good idea to address all sides of the argument or thesis to make your stance stronger. There are two main ways to incorporate sources into your research paper.
Quoting is when you use the exact words from a source. You will need to put quotation marks around the words that are not your own and cite where they came from. For example:
“It wasn’t really a tune, but from the first note the beast’s eyes began to droop . . . Slowly the dog’s growls ceased – it tottered on its paws and fell to its knees, then it slumped to the ground, fast asleep” (Rowling 275).
Follow these guidelines when opting to cite a passage:
Paraphrasing is when you state the ideas from another source in your own words . Even when you use your own words, if the ideas or facts came from another source, you need to cite where they came from. Quotation marks are not used. For example:
With the simple music of the flute, Harry lulled the dog to sleep (Rowling 275).
Follow these guidelines when opting to paraphrase a passage:
A summary is similar to paraphrasing, but used in cases where you are trying to give an overview of many ideas. As in paraphrasing, quotation marks are not used, but a citation is still necessary. For example:
Through a combination of skill and their invisibility cloak, Harry, Ron, and Hermione slipped through Hogwarts to the dog’s room and down through the trapdoor within (Rowling 271-77).
When integrating a source into your paper, remember to use these three important components:
Ideally, papers will contain a good balance of direct quotations, paraphrasing and your own thoughts. Too much reliance on quotations and paraphrasing can make it seem like you are only using the work of others and have no original thoughts on the topic.
Always properly cite an author’s original idea, whether you have directly quoted or paraphrased it. If you have questions about how to cite properly in your chosen citation style, browse these citation guides . You can also review our guide to understanding plagiarism .
The University of Nevada, Reno Writing Center provides helpful guidance on quoting and paraphrasing and explains how to make sure your paraphrasing does not veer into plagiarism. If you have any questions about quoting or paraphrasing, or need help at any point in the writing process, schedule an appointment with the Writing Center.
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When it comes to writing a descriptive essay, the key is to bring your reader into the world you are describing through vivid language and sensory details. From describing the aesthetics of a beautiful sunset to painting a picture of a child’s innocent laughter, a good descriptive essay can transport the reader to another time and place.
If you’ve been asked to write a descriptive essay for a class assignment or simply want to practice your descriptive writing skills, this article will guide you through the process. Whether you are structuring your essay as a five-paragraph essay or organizing it differently, knowing how to approach descriptive essay writing is essential.
In this article, we will discuss how to write a descriptive essay, the importance of choosing a specific topic, place, person, or object to focus on in your descriptive essay. We will also explore the value of paying close attention to sensory details and revising your sentences to create a more impactful piece of writing. Additionally, we will touch on the benefits of reading your essay aloud to others for constructive criticism and feedback.
So, let’s dive into the world of descriptive essay writing and learn how to write a descriptive essay of a particular subject.
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A descriptive essay is a type of essay that aims to provide a detailed description of a person, place, object, event, or idea. It utilizes sensory details to create a vivid picture for the reader. Through the use of vivid language and imagery, the writer conveys a deeper understanding and appreciation of the subject being described.
The purpose of a descriptive essay is to provide detailed descriptions and sensory details to create a vivid picture for the reader. This type of essay aims to engage the reader’s senses and emotions, allowing them to connect with the subject matter on a deeper level. Effective descriptive writing should appeal to the reader’s imagination and evoke a strong emotional response.
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Before you write a descriptive essay , it’s crucial to fully grasp what the prompt is asking. This step sets the foundation for your entire essay and helps guide your descriptive writing .
Start by reading the prompt carefully. Look for keywords that indicate what type of description is required. Are you being asked to describe a person, place, object, or experience ? Pay attention to any specific instructions about the essay ‘s length, format, or focus.
Consider the purpose of the assignment. Is it to evoke an emotion , paint a vivid image in the reader’s mind , or provide detailed information about a subject? Understanding this will help you choose appropriate sensory details and language .
If the prompt includes a specific question, make sure you address it fully in your essay. For example, if asked to describe a childhood memory, your description should focus on that particular experience rather than general recollections.
Look for any hints about the required rhetorical modes or writing style. Does the prompt suggest using figurative language like metaphors or similes ? Should you appeal to the reader’s sense of smell or taste ?
If you’re unsure about any aspect of the prompt, don’t hesitate to ask your instructor for clarification. It’s better to seek help early than to misinterpret the assignment and write an off-topic essay.
Selecting a strong topic is crucial for writing an engaging descriptive essay. Your topic should be something that sparks your interest and ignites your imagination . It could be a person, place, object, or experience that holds significant meaning for you. The more passionate you are about your subject, the easier it will be to describe it vividly.
Consider topics that allow for rich sensory details. For example, describing your childhood home can involve vivid visual descriptions (what your eye sees), sounds, smells, textures, and even tastes. This approach helps create a more immersive narrative for your reader. Remember, your goal is to paint a picture with words, so choose a subject that lends itself well to a detailed description.
When brainstorming topics, think about strong feelings or memories associated with potential subjects. These emotional connections can help you write more passionately and authentically. You might describe a favorite childhood toy, a memorable travel experience , or a person who has greatly influenced your life. Whatever you choose, make sure it’s something you can describe in-depth, using plenty of adjectives , adverbs , and vivid verbs to bring your subject to life on the paper .
Even if you’re writing about a familiar topic, doing some preliminary research can enhance your descriptive essay. This step helps you gather additional details, facts, or context that can enrich your description.
If you’re writing about a place, for example, you might research its history or aesthetic qualities. For a person, you could look into their background or accomplishments.
This research can provide new ideas or perspectives you hadn’t considered. It’s also helpful to explore literal and figurative language related to your topic, which can inspire creative descriptions.
As you research, keep your essay’s main concept or argument in mind, and jot down interesting nouns or phrases in an outline (list). Remember, the goal isn’t to turn your descriptive essay into a research paper but to gather information that will make your description more vivid and engaging.
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Creating an outline is a crucial step in writing an effective descriptive essay. It helps you organize your essay and ensures that your ideas flow logically. A well-structured outline serves as a roadmap for your writing, making the actual writing process smoother and more focused.
Start your descriptive essay outline with a basic structure: introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. In the introduction section, note down ideas for how you’ll capture the reader’s attention with a strong opening hook. Include a spot for your thesis statement, which will give the reader a clear idea of the purpose of the essay .
For the body, create sections for each main aspect of your description. If you’re describing a person , you might have sections for physical appearance, personality traits, and notable actions or experiences. Remember, the number of paragraphs may vary depending on your essay’s length and complexity.
Under each section of your outline, jot down key points and specific details you want to include. This is where you can plan how you’ll incorporate vivid language , similes and metaphors , and appeals to the five senses . By planning these elements in your outline, you ensure that your essay will be rich in descriptive detail.
Don’t forget to include a section in your outline for your conclusion, where you’ll summarize your main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader. Remember, this outline is a flexible tool – you can always adjust it as you write your essay .
A strong thesis statement is crucial for any type of essay , including a descriptive one. In a descriptive essay , your thesis should convey your unique perspective on the subject you’re describing and give readers a preview of the main aspects you’ll focus on.
To create a thesis statement for a descriptive essay, think about the overall impression or feeling you want to convey about your subject. For example, if you’re writing about a person , your thesis might be:
“My grandmother’s weathered hands and warm smile reflect a lifetime of hard work and unconditional love.”
This thesis not only tells the reader who you’re describing but also hints at the physical and emotional aspects you’ll explore in your essay.
Remember, your thesis should appear in your introductory paragraph , typically at the end. It sets the stage for the rest of your essay and guides your descriptive language throughout.
When crafting your thesis, avoid vague statements or clichés . Instead, strive for specificity and originality. If you’re describing a place or object , your thesis might highlight its most striking features or its significance to you. For instance:
“The old lighthouse, with its peeling paint and steadfast presence, stands as a silent guardian of the coast, embodying both decay and endurance.”
This thesis gives readers a clear picture of what to expect in the essay while also hinting at deeper themes. Remember, a strong thesis will help you stay focused as you write and will keep the reader engaged from the start.
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Conduct thorough research to find credible and up-to-date sources to support your arguments. Look for academic journals, books, and reliable websites. Evaluate the credibility of each source, considering the author’s expertise, publication date, and potential biases.
Take notes on key points, statistics, and quotations that support your arguments. Remember to properly cite your sources to avoid plagiarism.
The introduction is your chance to make your writing stand out from the start. Begin with a hook that grabs the reader’s attention – this could be an intriguing fact, a vivid description, or a thought-provoking question related to your topic.
For example, if you’re describing an event , you might start with a sensory detail that puts the reader right in the moment:
“The sharp crack of fireworks pierced the night sky, signaling the start of our small town’s annual festival.”
After the hook, provide some background information to give context to your description. This is where you can briefly explain why the subject is significant or interesting.
End your introduction with your thesis statement . This sentence should encapsulate the main idea of your essay and hint at the aspects you’ll be describing.
Remember, the introduction sets the tone for the rest of the essay , so make your writing engaging and descriptive from the start. Avoid generic openings or clichés . Instead, focus on a specific aspect that makes your subject unique. If you’re stuck, try reading some descriptive essay examples to see how other writers craft their introductions.
Keep in mind that while the introduction is important, you can always come back and refine it after you’ve written the body of your essay. The goal is to create a clear and inviting entry point that makes the reader eager to dive into your description.
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The body paragraphs are where you’ll paint an image for your reader. Typically, a descriptive essay has three body paragraphs , but this can vary depending on your topic and the required length.
Each paragraph should focus on a different aspect of your subject. Start each paragraph with a strong topic sentence that introduces the main idea. Then, use vivid details to bring that idea to life. Remember, the goal of a descriptive essay is to create a clear and vivid picture in the reader’s mind.
As you write the essay , appeal to as many of the senses of the reader as possible. Don’t just describe how something looks ; include details about how it sounds, smells, feels, and even tastes if applicable.
Use descriptive adjectives and strong verbs to make your writing more engaging. You can also incorporate literary devices like personification or metaphors to make your description more interesting.
Remember to focus on a specific aspect in each paragraph, whether you’re describing a place, object , friend, or family member . The key is to provide enough details about the topic to create a vivid image, while still maintaining a clear structure. As you write, keep referring back to your outline to ensure you’re covering all the important points you plan to include.
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The conclusion of your descriptive essay is your last chance to leave a lasting impression on your reader. Start by restating your thesis, but don’t simply repeat it word for word. Instead, rephrase it to reinforce your main point. Then, briefly summarize the key aspects you’ve described in your body paragraphs. This reminds the reader of the vivid picture you’ve painted throughout your essay .
To end with a strong final impression, consider including a broader statement about the significance of what you’ve described. If you’re describing a specific place or object , you might reflect on its importance to you or its broader meaning.
If you’ve chosen to describe a person or an abstract like an emotion , you could discuss how this description has deepened your understanding.
Avoid introducing new information in your conclusion. Instead, aim to tie everything together in a way that’s likely to stick with your reader. After you’ve written your conclusion, read your essay aloud to check its flow and impact. Remember, a good conclusion doesn’t just end your essay—it completes it.
Before submitting your essay, take the time to revise and edit it. Check for subject (grammar), spelling, and punctuation errors. Read your essay out loud to catch any awkward phrasing or unclear sentences.
Ensure your essay flows smoothly and that your arguments are supported by evidence. Ask a friend or mentor to review your work and provide feedback. They can offer valuable insights and help you refine your writing.
How do i start my descriptive essay.
To start your descriptive essay , begin by selecting a topic that you know well and that interests you . Consider choosing a specific place , person, or object to describe. Organize your thoughts and ideas before you start writing to ensure a coherent structure.
A descriptive essay typically consists of an introduction , body paragraphs that focus on specific details , a conclusion , supporting evidence , and descriptive language to create vivid imagery .
A descriptive essay is a type of essay that asks you to describe a particular topic , using sensory details to paint a vivid picture for the reader. For example, describing a favorite place , a memorable event , or a family member can be a great examples of descriptive writing.
Five examples of descriptive writing could include describing a beautiful sunset over the ocean , painting a picture of a bustling city street , detailing the smell of freshly baked bread , depicting the feeling of excitement at a concert , and portraying the emotions of saying goodbye to a loved one .
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Step 2: Write your initial answer. After some initial research, you can formulate a tentative answer to this question. At this stage it can be simple, and it should guide the research process and writing process. The internet has had more of a positive than a negative effect on education.
A thesis statement: tells the reader how you will interpret the significance of the subject matter under discussion. is a road map for the paper; in other words, it tells the reader what to expect from the rest of the paper. directly answers the question asked of you. A thesis is an interpretation of a question or subject, not the subject itself.
Tips for Writing Your Thesis Statement. 1. Determine what kind of paper you are writing: An analytical paper breaks down an issue or an idea into its component parts, evaluates the issue or idea, and presents this breakdown and evaluation to the audience.; An expository (explanatory) paper explains something to the audience.; An argumentative paper makes a claim about a topic and justifies ...
Step 4: Revise and refine your thesis statement before you start writing. Read through your thesis statement several times before you begin to compose your full essay. You need to make sure the statement is ironclad, since it is the foundation of the entire paper. Edit it or have a peer review it for you to make sure everything makes sense and ...
A good thesis has two parts. It should tell what you plan to argue, and it should "telegraph" how you plan to argue—that is, what particular support for your claim is going where in your essay. Steps in Constructing a Thesis. First, analyze your primary sources. Look for tension, interest, ambiguity, controversy, and/or complication.
4. A strong thesis statement is specific. A thesis statement should show exactly what your paper will be about, and will help you keep your paper to a manageable topic. For example, if you're writing a seven-to-ten page paper on hunger, you might say: World hunger has many causes and effects. This is a weak thesis statement for two major reasons.
A thesis statement . . . Makes an argumentative assertion about a topic; it states the conclusions that you have reached about your topic. Makes a promise to the reader about the scope, purpose, and direction of your paper. Is focused and specific enough to be "proven" within the boundaries of your paper. Is generally located near the end ...
A good thesis statement needs to do the following: Condense the main idea of your thesis into one or two sentences. Answer your project's main research question. Clearly state your position in relation to the topic. Make an argument that requires support or evidence.
Thesis. Your thesis is the central claim in your essay—your main insight or idea about your source or topic. Your thesis should appear early in an academic essay, followed by a logically constructed argument that supports this central claim. A strong thesis is arguable, which means a thoughtful reader could disagree with it and therefore ...
6. Incorporating the Thesis Statement into Your Essay. In this section, we will explore how to effectively incorporate your thesis statement into your essay. The thesis statement serves as the guiding principle of your writing, and integrating it seamlessly into your essay is essential for maintaining focus and coherence throughout your work.
thesis statement, and it serves as a summary of the argument you'll make in the rest of your paper. What is a thesis statement? A thesis statement: tells the reader how you will interpret the significance of the subject matter under discussion. is a road map for the paper; in other words, it tells the reader what to expect from the rest of ...
By incorporating the answers to these questions into a thesis statement, the writer more accurately defines his or her stance, which will better guide the writing of the essay. 3. Replace any linking verbs with action verbs.
Examples of a thesis statement for an analytical essay include: The criminal justice reform bill passed by the U.S. Senate in late 2018 ("The First Step Act") aims to reduce prison sentences that disproportionately fall on nonwhite criminal defendants.
What your thesis statement includes is determined by three things: 1. The subject and topic of the essay. 2. The purpose of the essay. 3. The length of the essay. Let's examine each of those in more detail to see how they can help us refine our thesis statement.
Thesis Your thesis is the central claim in your essay—your main insight or idea about your source or topic. Your thesis should appear early in an academic essay, followed by a logically constructed argument that supports this central claim. A strong thesis is arguable, which means a thoughtful reader could disagree with it and therefore needs
A thesis statement is the single, specific claim that your essay supports. A strong thesis answers the question you want to raise; it does so by presenting a topic, the position you wish to defend, and a reasoning blueprint that sketches out your defense of your chosen position. A good thesis is not merely a factual statement, an observation, a personal opinion or preference, or the question ...
Wondering how to write a thesis statement? Our guided tips can help. ... including an overview of what you'll specifically talk about in your essay. Every essay has a thesis of some sort that usually appears as the last sentence of ... You know what goes into a good thesis statement, but it can take a little time and practice to really figure ...
Doing so will refine your thesis, and also force you to consider arguments you have to refute in your paper. 5. Write down your thesis. Writing down a preliminary thesis will get you on the right track and force you to think about it, develop your ideas further, and clarify the content of the paper.
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How to write a thesis statement. Follow these steps to create an effective and informative thesis statement: 1. Choose an essay style. Before you can begin writing your thesis or paper, you must decide which style of essay is most effective for your specific needs. Here are a few of the options:
Check your outline. Place your thesis at the top of the outline followed by the causes and/or effects: I. II. III. Under each main point, place two main specific points that will support the general topic sentence and the thesis. Use capital letters for the specific points.
Important guidelines. When integrating a source into your paper, remember to use these three important components: Introductory phrase to the source material: mention the author, date, or any other relevant information when introducing a quote or paraphrase. Source material: a direct quote, paraphrase, or summary with proper citation.
Start your descriptive essay outline with a basic structure: introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. In the introduction section, note down ideas for how you'll capture the reader's attention with a strong opening hook. Include a spot for your thesis statement, which will give the reader a clear idea of the purpose of the essay.